Throughout the excellent scheme of things you get a B+ for effort and hard work. Exactly where you misplaced everybody was in the details. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more accurate right here. Having said that, let me say to you just what exactly did do the job. The text is actually very engaging and that is most likely the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, whilst I can easily see the jumps in reason you make, I am not certain of exactly how you appear to connect your details which inturn produce the final result. For right now I shall yield to your position but hope in the near future you connect your dots much better.