In the wonderful pattern of things you actually receive an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where you actually misplaced me personally was in your facts. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more correct at this point. Having said that, allow me reveal to you just what did do the job. Your writing is rather engaging which is most likely why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can easily notice a leaps in logic you make, I am not convinced of exactly how you seem to unite your details which inturn help to make your final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue however trust in the near future you link the dots much better.