In the great scheme of things you'll receive a B+ just for hard work. Exactly where you lost me personally was on all the details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true here. Having said that, let me reveal to you just what exactly did work. The authoring can be highly convincing which is probably why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily notice the leaps in logic you make, I am definitely not certain of how you appear to connect the ideas that help to make the actual final result. For the moment I will yield to your point however hope in the near future you actually connect your facts much better.