In the grand pattern of things you actually secure a B+ just for hard work. Exactly where you confused everybody ended up being in your particulars. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me say to you precisely what did work. Your writing is definitely really powerful which is probably why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, despite the fact that I can certainly notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not really confident of how you appear to unite the points which make the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but wish in the near future you actually connect your facts better.