In this amazing scheme of things you secure a B- just for effort. Where you confused everybody was first in your details. You know, they say, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true at this point. Having said that, permit me tell you what exactly did do the job. Your writing is definitely highly engaging and this is probably the reason why I am taking the effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can see a leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am definitely not sure of how you seem to connect the ideas which in turn produce the actual conclusion. For right now I will subscribe to your issue however wish in the near future you link the dots better.