In this wonderful pattern of things you'll get a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost me personally was on all the details. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate in this article. Having said that, allow me tell you just what exactly did do the job. Your writing is actually extremely persuasive and this is most likely why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily see the leaps in reason you make, I am not really certain of just how you appear to connect the details which inturn make your conclusion. For right now I will, no doubt subscribe to your position but hope in the near future you actually connect the facts much better.