In this grand design of things you get a B- for hard work. Where exactly you confused me was on all the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true here. Having said that, permit me reveal to you just what exactly did work. The text is actually really persuasive and this is most likely why I am making the effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can see a jumps in reason you make, I am not necessarily sure of just how you seem to unite your details that produce the actual final result. For right now I shall yield to your position but trust in the near future you actually link the facts better.