In the awesome design of things you secure an A+ for effort and hard work. Where you lost us was in the particulars. You know, people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more true here. Having said that, allow me inform you exactly what did give good results. The writing can be highly powerful which is probably the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can easily see the jumps in reasoning you make, I am not sure of just how you seem to connect the points which inturn produce the final result. For now I shall yield to your position but wish in the near future you actually connect the dots much better.