In this great design of things you actually receive a B+ just for effort. Where exactly you lost us was in all the facts. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be much more true here. Having said that, permit me inform you exactly what did work. The article (parts of it) is definitely very convincing and this is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can see the leaps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily convinced of how you appear to connect the ideas which inturn help to make your conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but wish in the foreseeable future you actually connect your dots better.